A fine dedication. In the aftermath, so much still hung about the soul...and still hangs...
And didn't it fall! I think the surprise came when the world actually joined together...to help itself rise in the aftermath. A wonderful tribute to a day that changed me forever.
wow great description..and how true..all the fury but silent and then for a time we came together as one...
yes, it took all of our voices away...... few things in life are that incredibly horrible...... nice vision.......
An extremely strong write, exceptionally done, thanks for sharing
True and you captured it well. Very nice.
"full of fury but no sound"The 'loud silence' can very well describe how one feels about that event. One cannot comprehend it, it is a wordless description. Thanks for your write.
Yes, perfect. So true the world fell down that day and the fury was voiceless as impotence is.great one!
clever, clever... the silence is brilliant in this.
In the simplicity volumes are speaking. Lovely write ~ Rose
This fine piece says it all; it sent a shiver down my spine and I caught my breath.Anna :o]
I think your first line says it all - and perfectly dips into the last line! nicely put, thanks for the words on my poem! great writing here!
Ostensible Truth -- Thanks for coming back to read my other poems. I appreciate your support! -Finally